Until We Said Goodbye

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I’m here with you even I tried to leave.
On a deeply breath I hid what I felt
From the sweetest cares you shared;
Until we said goodbye.

Those walked we had on that road together.
We become comfortable and closer.
For you can lay your head over my shoulder;
Until we said goodbye.

I’m kindly trap inside your loving heart.
I can gently stay within this life.
And love with you forever;
Until we said goodbye.

I dedicate this poem to a couple who never let their partners dies inside their heart even though they passed away – Dlysen

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11 responses to “Until We Said Goodbye”

August 26, 2009

lourdes

i love the poem, its short but really nice, when you read it the essence of the poem is simply but deep that you will feel … the words it self in each sentence is meaningful …

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August 26, 2009

zed

wow ganda ng poem n touch ako………….

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August 26, 2009

tere

nice work.. so deep :)

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August 27, 2009

Paulo

This is a great romantic poem, and I’m sure it will touch a lot of girls hearts…. I’m going to share it with my wife. :-)
Keep up the great poems…
Cheers… Paulo

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August 27, 2009

emdeeph

Nice poem.. It’s easier to appreciate poems that comes from the heart, and this poem is an example..i can feel it and for sure lot of people can relate to this too. Saying goodbye is the hardest thing for me, yet when learned and if it’s for the better of both sides, you’ll be thankful you have loved..

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August 27, 2009

dlysen

Some poem I created was expressed from the emotion I borrowed from the past and personal experienced.

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August 27, 2009

avi

woooo…..nice piece dude…keep it up!!

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September 2, 2009

Prinsesa ng Drama

Nice poem! :)
Thanks for dropping by my page.
Keep safe :)

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September 22, 2009

chemmz

good job.. short but full of emotions.. it can move hearts…

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March 1, 2010

Fr. Felmar Castrodes Fiel, SVD

short poem but meaningful…

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September 11, 2012

andrea

When i read this poem i feel sad because of the word say goodbye saying to someone i feel sad. Lalo na nakasanayan muna sya at lagi mong kasama sa buhay. I hope it will not say goodbye i will share to my love one.Thanks i appreciate this poem a lot.

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