I love to be with you but I hate the things we do

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I always wanted to be with you.
Stay, live, and laugh with you.
I love to cry and share the feelings.
To risk my love for you I’m willing.

To cheat the most I love I hate.
The things we do forward this kiss.
It brings discomfort, guilt and pain.
Please help me God forgive my sin.

Help me to make this shadows go.
And gain more fear for I love you.
We need to be in faithful ways.
And love the things we hate to do.

This is a short poem about love and lust, a kiss with pleasure and discomfort. I hope you can relate when you are kissing someone that you must not do.

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6 responses to “I love to be with you but I hate the things we do”

August 7, 2009

pUsa

impressive. but very tricky. ^_^

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August 7, 2009

Ching

One comment:
Help me let these shadows go
With regards to the poem… it seems so sincere that it’s scary. Good luck with that, brother.

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August 10, 2009

lourdes

its nice, i like it… its meaningful!!!

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August 27, 2009

emdeeph

poem is so tricky.. you have to read it twice or thrice to get the meaning and emotion of the writer. Hmmm seems like the writer got this from his experience hehe

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September 24, 2009

gail

This is amazing. nice poem dude =)

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September 11, 2012

andrea

The message its seems emotero hahhah but i like it dami nakakarelay bagay na bagy sayo yan. Nice continue writing inspirational message.

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